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A well crafted tale that gets unfolded through conversation. Bravo!

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Thank you!

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Very effective use of dialogue. I felt the tension rising and the relationship unfolding as I read.

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Thank you, Laura! Just wanted you to know that your art posts helped me find the courage to share my stories and my original illustrations on all but the very first story. So, for that, thank you again!

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Ohhhh, great, illustrative story. Love the gotcha end too! Well told, J.L.

And glad to connect.

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Thank you so much!

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Thank you, Alma! I was hearing exactly that as I wrote it!

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That's a wonderful way to reveal someone's comeuppance!!

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Thank you! ❤

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