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E.R. Flynn's avatar

A well crafted tale that gets unfolded through conversation. Bravo!

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J. L. Sullens's avatar

Thank you!

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Laura DP's avatar

Very effective use of dialogue. I felt the tension rising and the relationship unfolding as I read.

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J. L. Sullens's avatar

Thank you, Laura! Just wanted you to know that your art posts helped me find the courage to share my stories and my original illustrations on all but the very first story. So, for that, thank you again!

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Bonnie L Samuel's avatar

Ohhhh, great, illustrative story. Love the gotcha end too! Well told, J.L.

And glad to connect.

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J. L. Sullens's avatar

Thank you so much!

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J. L. Sullens's avatar

Thank you, Alma! I was hearing exactly that as I wrote it!

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Sue Clancy's avatar

That's a wonderful way to reveal someone's comeuppance!!

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J. L. Sullens's avatar

Thank you! ❤

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